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Sleep, till our dreams end.
And life but a melancholic something, we used to share.
To touch and to feel. To be loved is to be known...
And to be known... is to be loved.
Sleep.
Until Charon drifts you to the end of the river Styx
Where the damned lay and the spirits wail
Where maggots scream and the nether...
The nether thirsts for blood
And everything dear,
Everything
That you know love, fades away.
Clawing.
Bit by bit at your chest.
Leaving nothing...
But
An
Exposed
Heart
Still beating, but ever so softly
Ever so gently.

Reality is but a dream...
And I... I
Don't want to sleep.
Just not yet
©2007-2009 ~Gatriel
:icongatriel:

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:iconhallow-oblivion:
sorry i wouldn't know what critique to give but i can say one thing this is really good.
:icongatriel:
Thanks bro

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Saanka
:iconsorrowfulnightfalls:
dont really know what to say about it other than i like it. especially the last bit about reality.

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:frail: Hate all you want, but you can't break the girl who thinks nothing of you. :frail:
:iconpetit-chou-fleur:
I love how you create a sense of mood. Very nicely done.

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Tranquility interrupted by a jealous mind, life overcome by the grief of the ending, celebratory drinks for a lost occasion, a mind full of black, the tainted, dirty white.
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:icongatriel:
Mood=best

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Saanka
:iconpetit-chou-fleur:
Lol

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Tranquility interrupted by a jealous mind, life overcome by the grief of the ending, celebratory drinks for a lost occasion, a mind full of black, the tainted, dirty white.
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